On Poetry: The Beast That Resides in You

Having enrolled in a Poetry class in your MA, it is for sure expected that you have to produce an output of your own. And so here goes mine, both the original and revised version.

The Beast That Resides In You 

by Cee Brensan 

Fear is when you cease to try,

To try the things that will make you cry.

You cry for you may not give your best;

For in your mind you have the biggest beast

But dear friend, I'll tell you one advice,

It is the Fear, in you resides. 

Original photo of the output I submitted ahahha!